I had this cartoon stored far in my memories, almost completely forgotten. Watching it again made me realize it was probably your cartoon that caused me to never want to smoke in life, ever. Great animation!

I'm a fan of this piece and GT. You did a nice job replicating the character style and the grain gives it that special kick, but I think the earth would fit better in place than the silhouettes. It would act as a nice foreshadowing to Goku's transformation soon after this "scene" - it looks like the area it happens.

No shade to Helena "the G", but man, what an upgrade! Swiper looks gorgeous in your style. And he has real joints in his arms now!

What I like most about this is the colouring choice: grayscale with a splash of vibrant hue (red). The subject is composed in a 1/3, more interesting to me than a center stage and leaves more to the imagination. The face, disregarding the eyes, nose, and lips, looks a bit flat on the cheeks and chin, maybe some lighter highlights and darker shadows can create more depth there. Pretty cool picture, overall. I'd like to know the story behind this, and why Dora's eyes are blue instead of brown.